Thanks, Chris. To respond to your thoughts:

1. I hadn’t thought of it that way. Good point. :)
2. Going to read it right after finishing this response to your comments. Thanks for the recommendation.
3. Yes, I’m a perfectionist. I have a hard time just letting words flow and I tend to try to edit as I write, which doesn’t help. I do need to do as you suggest and just play with it, rather than trying to get the writing just right.

Thanks so much for reading and your great comments!